All I want,
baby,
can’t be held.
Don’t you see
everything that is great in this whole
fucking world is intangible?
Get me out of
here, this simple world, where
I
just can’t find
kind
love.
My inner being lives for
night time and whispers
or morning and yelling.
Promise to be with me,
quiet and
really
still.
Time has a way to slip
unbeknownst to all yet with a
violent
waiting wrath.
X-ray family eyes fill you to capacity with guilt
you sink into sorrow.
Zero room for argument.
*Each line of this mixed up poem corresponds to a letter of the alphabet. I’m bored with my writing and this was my solution!
simple world where one cant find love.. oh yes, i can associate with that for sure.. good ABC poem.!
Love the alphabet angle but more importantly the content of the poem…great job!
lovely images in your word painting..
🙂
Interesting idea for mixing things up.
a butterfly award for you.
😉
I hope you cured your boredom…. well done, great approach. Heartspell
Creative! I definitely didn’t find this to be boring at all.
I like this.
Good job
Well done for pushing your writing forward and setting yourself new challenges – nicely executed